Bug 1795777 - News section clarifications for 2.53.15b1. r=IanN a=IanN

src/news.en.xml

@@ -18,14 +18,22 @@ SeaMonkey website.
 <p>
 2.53.15 will be an incremental update on the 2.53.x branch and incorporates a
 number of enhancements, changes and fixes to the application as well as those
-from the underlying platform code. Updated SSL handling code (NSS) to ESR102 level. Some minor updates to web compatibility, microtask and filtering / tagging
-in mailnews. Some changes have been made to the preferences and locale code,
-please test the add-ons that you have installed. This update also includes a fix
-for the crashes during startup on macOS 13 Ventura. <b>Before installing the new
-version make a full backup of your profile and thoroughly read and follow the
-<a href="releases/seamonkey2.53.15/">Release Notes</a></b>. We encourage testers
-to <a href="dev/get-involved">get involved</a> in discussing and reporting
-problems as well as further improving the product.
+from the underlying platform code.
+</p>
+<p>
+We updated the SSL handling code (NSS) to Mozilla ESR102 level. The release
+also contains some minor updates for web compatibility like implementing
+microtasks. Improvements for filtering / tagging mails have been put in. Some
+changes have been made to the preferences and locale code handling so please
+test the add-ons that you have installed. <b>This update also includes a fix
+for the crashes during startup on macOS 13 Ventura.</b>
+</p>
+<p>
+<b>Before installing the new version make a full backup of your profile and
+thoroughly read and follow the <a href="releases/seamonkey2.53.15/">Release
+Notes</a></b>. We encourage testers to <a href="dev/get-involved">get
+involved</a> in discussing and reporting problems as well as further improving
+the product.
 </p>
 <p>
 SeaMonkey 2.53.15 Beta 1 is available in 23 languages, for Windows, macOS x64

src/releases/seamonkey2.53.15/index.en.html

@@ -97,13 +97,13 @@ for new information.
     and <a
     href="https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1392929">bug 1392929</a>.
   </li>
-  <li>Remove remaining uses of `general.useragent.locale` <a
+  <li>Remove remaining uses of 'general.useragent.locale' <a
     href="https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1410736">bug 1410736</a>
     and <a
     href="https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1410738">bug 1410738</a>.
   </li>
   <li>Migrate to intl.locale.requested.locale list from
-    general.useragent.locale <a
+    'general.useragent.locale' <a
     href="https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1441016">bug 1441016</a>.
   </li>
   <li>Introduce a pref to store BCP47 locale list <a
@@ -134,10 +134,6 @@ for new information.
   <li>Security info dialog doesn't show cert status anymore <a
     href="https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1293378">bug 1293378</a>.
   </li>
-  <li>Check that we got a non-null header before running a filter on it (and
-    crashing) <a
-    href="https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1563959">bug 1563959</a>.
-  </li>
   <li>Replace nsIPlatfromCharset in mailnews <a
     href="https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1381762">bug 1381762</a>.
   </li>
@@ -168,7 +164,7 @@ for new information.
   <li>With CONDSTORE, eliminate unneeded flag fetches at startup <a
     href="https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1428097">bug 1428097</a>.
   </li>
-  <li>Fix so custom tags (keywords) are visble to all users <a
+  <li>Fix so custom tags (keywords) are visible to all users <a
     href="https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=583677">bug 583677</a>.
   </li>
   <li>Improve handling of tags on shared folders <a
@@ -193,8 +189,8 @@ for new information.
     href="https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1797696">bug 1797696</a>.
   </li>
   <li>Continue the switch from Python 2 to Python 3 in the build system.</li>
-  <li>Added support for clang 15 and macOS sdk 11.3</li>
-  <li>Added compatibility for rust 1.65</li>
+  <li>Added support for clang 15 and macOS SDK 11.3.</li>
+  <li>Verified compatibility with Rust 1.65.</li>
 </ul>
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